Report by Reda Alkaabi

dear sir:This is my article:Boys Town "NEBRASKA"It is a famed village style haven for (a) troubled kids who have (a) real sad stories : broken homes , neglect abuse , drugs/alcohol usage and who have been to detention centers . They were sent to this town by their relatives and they lives(S) here in group homes. (and) tTheir teachers give them back their childhoods ,by teaching them skills and giving them love. This town leans against Omaha's sprawl but retains its identity as a campus of sorts with five hundred kids , ranging from middle school (and)to high school (,)with 2 churches , a park, post office , police (and) fire station , atheltic(S) facility and fields.The teachers advice (any)the visitor's (dont)not to (ask them) the children about their pasts (,) and let them focus on the present.There are some roles in adressing and a hair cut(not clear )(but). Tthe students are interested ,( they have) in work shops and play sports like footbal matches and the girls share kitchen duties .Some of them say "Boys Town saved my life, so i will come back to help the next generation."

Reda Alkaabi

Well, the main points of the story were highlighted.
You have a habit of adding 'a' to every plural word: aboys ,atroubled kids and many more which i deleted instantly.
AVOID THAT!

Grammar,grammar and grammar>>>work on it!!!

Sincerely,

Mubs