Samira's report

This is my report about Turkey.Turkey is a famous and beautiful country.(how about joining the first two sentences?)
This is a report about the famous and beautiful country called Turkey. At first, you think(WC) the sights,smells,and sounds are just a feast for the senses, but then you realize that all the little curlicues and flourishes of Turkish culture and(R) art and(R) architecture actually relate to the country's complex past(break the sentence into 2).The Turks roll all those(their) traditions into who they are today: proud, refined,a little reserved,(refined yet reserved) they'r(they are) also amazing craftsmen and artists(with a display of amazing artistic craftsmanship.The most wonderful place I like in Turkey is Istanbul's Labyrinthine. It's covered bazaar, (you see all) (highlights) their crafts-gold, and(G) gem work, carpets, leather work and hand painted tiles. But the very best crafts man ship(carftsmanship) on display in the bazaar is the Turkish art of deal making.Turkey has always been at the crossroads of Europe and asia(Asia), with foot in each. A place, not quite like any other, that knows how to hold to its past and yet constantly change.

The report was well done.
Samira, dear you forgot to mention the author's name.Further more,placing facts is a good thing-shows the reader your memory and interest.
Avoid using 'and' repeatedly-be cautious! .


humbly,
Mubs