NATIONAL GEOGRAPHIC MAGAZINE-THE KING COBRAS.

King Cobras are the longest venomous snakes that produces(G) starling (did you mean startling?)amounts of neurotoxins.The(G) are shy (and)retreating ,and aggressive only if provoked.Although snakes strike fear in many Westerners,in the East the cobra is often an object of worship and reverence.In New Delhi for example, cobras are serpents of the Gods,while in Thailand they are used as part of peoples livelihoods.About 25 cents is paid by passersby(passerby's?) to watch ladies dancing with the cobra's head in their mouth.Cobras are also the forest's deadly king - wherever it resides,and no smaller snakes of any species is safe.A modern snakebite remedy,(P)-antivenom,is made by having adult cobras milked ,and(can we use a comma and'and' together?) small doses of the venom is injected into horses until they develop antibodies.Later, the horse plasma is collected and treated to make a final product which if given to a victim in time,stops the venom's toxic effects.
Mais.

Dear Mais,
Your report was very informative, since you intelligently absorbed all the facts and organised them in your essay.
Minute grammer mistakes.
Impressive!

Regards,
Mubs